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Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-16-2018, 10:08 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 339
Posted By Grace Gabriel
American football seems to have the speed and...

American football seems to have the speed and edge of rugby but there's rarely a chance to catch it on UK telly. Guessing I'd find it more appealing than our own yob culture contribution.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-16-2018, 10:04 AM
Replies: 9,244
Views: 290,237
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Moby - Extreme Ways and Sting - Shape...

Moby - Extreme Ways

and

Sting - Shape of My Heart
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-16-2018, 10:00 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 339
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Enjoy the last week of Wimbledon when we're down...

Enjoy the last week of Wimbledon when we're down to the titans thrashing it out on court.

No to football of any variety.
Forum: Poetry 07-16-2018, 09:56 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 637
Posted By Grace Gabriel
I've found that black t shirts hide the...

I've found that black t shirts hide the inevitable drool and food spillages. It's just all soft foods laced with senna pods these days...
Forum: Poetry 07-16-2018, 09:48 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 254
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Read this every time I log on. So subtle....

Read this every time I log on.

So subtle. You've painted red raw emotion with a pastel palette..

but then you've never failed to deliver.

Kudos x
Forum: The Intellectual Table 07-16-2018, 12:52 AM
Replies: 79
Views: 1,018
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Love it!

Love it!
Forum: The Intellectual Table 07-15-2018, 07:20 PM
Replies: 79
Views: 1,018
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Konan, an online persona is a projection of the...

Konan, an online persona is a projection of the inner you - not a fictional character.

In one thread you talk about "us women" - in another you're laying out a male perspective of what's...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 07-15-2018, 10:52 AM
Replies: 79
Views: 1,018
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Aww honey, don't cry, jes demand and supply, ...

Aww honey, don't cry,
jes demand and supply,
wooh yeah....uum-huum
don't drink from that font,
you jes play the tunes you want
oooooh oooh...eurgh huh..yeah
Forum: Fiction 07-15-2018, 09:47 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 468
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Anybody who breaks in "yielding a pistol" isn't...

Anybody who breaks in "yielding a pistol" isn't bad - just suicidal. ;)

(maybe change to 'wielding' for a more convincing aggressor)
Forum: The Intellectual Table 07-15-2018, 09:41 AM
Replies: 79
Views: 1,018
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Nah. Can't dismiss Ed Sheeran as a "pussy" - 70...

Nah. Can't dismiss Ed Sheeran as a "pussy" - 70 million in the bank before you hit 30 shows an admirable work ethic and talent. Like him or loathe him, he doesn't fit the mould of a conveyor belt...
Forum: Poetry 07-08-2018, 02:17 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 254
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Wow. Nailed it.

Wow.

Nailed it.
Forum: Poetry 07-08-2018, 02:12 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 637
Posted By Grace Gabriel
My use of the English language will permit you to...

My use of the English language will permit you to 'make an ass of yourself' (a reference to the donkey/mule of the genus equus, known for a stubborn, somewhat stupid nature) or you can be an 'arse'...
Forum: Poetry 07-06-2018, 03:18 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 637
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Uh huh. Fine. No really - that's fine. ...

Uh huh.

Fine.

No really - that's fine.

You gad about in your pungent pants if you want to...I mean, it's just down to me to turn up all the time, giving you my very best and trying to make...
Forum: Poetry 07-05-2018, 02:15 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 637
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Like the imagery of being trapped inside the...

Like the imagery of being trapped inside the confines of your circumstances... snapping at one provocation too far...could feel the pressure.

My eye for symmetry was compelled to tidy up your...
Forum: Poetry 07-05-2018, 12:27 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 160
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Kinda like this Yonathan - the milk description...

Kinda like this Yonathan - the milk description captures that fresh, cold taste beautifully - but maybe ice skates in waterfalls rather than 'like' waterfalls.

Do canine teeth hiss? Sounds more of...
Forum: Poetry 07-04-2018, 12:30 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 328
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Understated... sturdy and reliable... not afraid...

Understated... sturdy and reliable... not afraid of hard work... distressed leather appearance masking surprising suppleness...routine maintenance adding extra years of life expectancy... requires an...
Forum: Poetry 07-04-2018, 12:47 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 345
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Sure. Just amend the draft above and I'll re-read.

Sure. Just amend the draft above and I'll re-read.
Forum: Poetry 07-04-2018, 12:46 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 328
Posted By Grace Gabriel
If only...he normally just talks to himself ;)

If only...he normally just talks to himself ;)
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-04-2018, 12:44 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 2,230
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Flea's philosophy has crystalized into the truth...

Flea's philosophy has crystalized into the truth of it - in a hectic world, reading is more palatable in bite-size chunks to accompany the mid-morning coffee.

All the debate over how and where to...
Forum: Poetry 07-03-2018, 04:40 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 345
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Hi Yonathan1, Stopping to comment as you've...

Hi Yonathan1,

Stopping to comment as you've asked for critique.

Worth varying your vocabulary and making it more concise when you're writing with a clipped tone.

'shit'...followed by...
Forum: Poetry 07-03-2018, 04:17 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 328
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Piercey, I thank Google for all its...

Piercey, I thank Google for all its interpolations over the years that have made communication between us possible.

Now, give an old gal a thrill and tell me which cowboy boots you're wearing....
Forum: Poetry 07-03-2018, 01:27 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 328
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Thanks Vince, I'll try and find it. I like...

Thanks Vince, I'll try and find it.

I like the changes - sounds like the voice of experience now.

I love to hear about love - best wishes for you both x
Forum: The Intellectual Table 07-03-2018, 01:24 PM
Replies: 164
Views: 2,439
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Yep, some things should never be rubbed up the...

Yep, some things should never be rubbed up the wrong way.
Forum: Poetry 07-02-2018, 06:50 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 328
Posted By Grace Gabriel
I could feel that the sentiment was genuine - and...

I could feel that the sentiment was genuine - and lovely.

That's why it would be so much more powerful if you made it a little personal - name the trials you have overcome - whether its...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 07-02-2018, 06:27 PM
Replies: 164
Views: 2,439
Posted By Grace Gabriel
Sphane, I can understand your sentiment but I...

Sphane, I can understand your sentiment but I don' t think there's a rise in muscle atheism -just a prevalence of trolling generally. Worthless words spat from anonymous mouths.

Religion is...
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