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Forum: Introductions 10-11-2017, 01:26 PM
Replies: 4
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Posted By kev
whereupon the goblin looked down at his hands,...

whereupon the goblin looked down at his hands, shrugged and then asked "...if an actor doesn't believe in his part while playing it, do you think the onlooker will believe in him any more than he...
Forum: Poetry 10-04-2017, 09:27 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 320
Posted By kev
Thanks chat....Though it's finished and won't be...

Thanks chat....Though it's finished and won't be altered, but thanks for responding.
Forum: Poetry 10-02-2017, 02:44 PM
Replies: 42
Views: 1,088
Posted By kev
Thanks for the first take Myers. You've got the...

Thanks for the first take Myers. You've got the slinky sort of sensual sound. - a base to work from- , Maybe that sort of horn sound could be swapped for a deeper sax if you gave it it room by...
Forum: Poetry 10-02-2017, 01:38 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 320
Posted By kev
:eek:

:eek:
Forum: Poetry 10-01-2017, 08:53 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 320
Posted By kev
At times it takes awhile for something to sink in...

At times it takes awhile for something to sink in and accept that it sits better than what I had. Thanks Grace.
Forum: Poetry 09-29-2017, 09:57 AM
Replies: 42
Views: 1,088
Posted By kev
I like your style Myers. No idea what a major or...

I like your style Myers. No idea what a major or minor is unless I hear it. Can't play any instrument for the life of me, but what I hear is the foot drum three or four times then guitar playing the...
Forum: Poetry 09-27-2017, 11:30 PM
Replies: 42
Views: 1,088
Posted By kev
Yes brian, a ballad type song but with something...

Yes brian, a ballad type song but with something more to equal the quality of words.
Forum: Poetry 09-27-2017, 01:59 PM
Replies: 42
Views: 1,088
Posted By kev
Love it Grace. Real feeling expressed that I...

Love it Grace. Real feeling expressed that I relate to. ....Got the rhythm but don't hear the music that was going off in your head.
Do you play a keyboard, guitar?
Forum: Poetry 09-27-2017, 08:10 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 320
Posted By kev
Armstrong

I cannot remember, I do not recall
Climbing the air unbalanced
to stand wavering on the brink of a step,
anchoring to the earth in a moments pause
before the prod of discovery urged my first...
Forum: Poetry 09-19-2017, 10:37 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 549
Posted By kev
Nail on the head Grace. The last verse is the one...

Nail on the head Grace. The last verse is the one that's quietly solid. I like the meaning and have felt similar to what the poem expresses in my years travelling from country to country, yet rarely...
Forum: Poetry 09-08-2017, 01:40 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 739
Posted By kev
it feels like a disconnected...

it feels like a disconnected distance........Perhaps that was what the old guy was feeling? Can't change the structure or meaning of it Drew. It comes out in what form it arrives at. It made sense.
Forum: Poetry 09-08-2017, 01:15 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 739
Posted By kev
Guess we're on the same page Grace.

Guess we're on the same page Grace.
Forum: Poetry 09-06-2017, 10:38 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 739
Posted By kev
I don't know the technicalities of it Myers.. I...

I don't know the technicalities of it Myers.. I tend to look at Ted Hughes Jaguar or Wind as the pinnacle of prose poetry. It's not so much a knowing but more of feeling what it is for me
Forum: Poetry 09-06-2017, 10:14 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 739
Posted By kev
I was on my bike and saw the old man for a second...

I was on my bike and saw the old man for a second or two--lonely, abandoned, as so many are when nudged into an old folks home because family don't want to look after them. It's they who lack the...
Forum: Poetry 09-01-2017, 08:39 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 739
Posted By kev
It's supposed to be prose poetry Myers, at least...

It's supposed to be prose poetry Myers, at least my understanding of prose poetry, could be wrong, but if I am I'm sure someone will pop up and tell me why.
Thanks for explaining.
Forum: Poetry 09-01-2017, 08:20 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 739
Posted By kev
You caused me to have a stomach chuckle with that...

You caused me to have a stomach chuckle with that response Grace. Hope you've recovered.
Forum: Poetry 09-01-2017, 08:09 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 572
Posted By kev
Spot on Myers......corny lyrics, but when I...

Spot on Myers......corny lyrics, but when I listened to the song it reminded me of early to mid sixties. I was pretty impressed with what you've got together. Was it your voice? If brians input was...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-31-2017, 09:07 AM
Replies: 98
Views: 2,586
Posted By kev
He did say that when he hits 70 he's gonna locate...

He did say that when he hits 70 he's gonna locate to the Philippines with his missus (a promise must be kept.) he said that round 18 months ago, except a promise must be kept, though I'm sure he's...
Forum: Poetry 08-31-2017, 08:36 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 739
Posted By kev
Pace and rhythm. That and the stronger lines,...

Pace and rhythm. That and the stronger lines, perhaps is what kept pulling me back to it. Chuffed it conected with you. Thanks Leila.
Forum: Poetry 08-31-2017, 08:29 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 739
Posted By kev
Hi Myers, thanks for the feedback. When you say...

Hi Myers, thanks for the feedback. When you say prosey , do you mean forced or depersonalised?
I used to visit a friend with a shortcut through a park, and then through a side passage and open gate...
Forum: Poetry 08-30-2017, 08:44 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 739
Posted By kev
Old Folks Home

Old men stare through stale air,
unblinking, expressionless.
In the still room they sit in rigid retreat,
Thoughts turned in
against the visual effort of movement.

Memories host the hour and...
Forum: Poetry 08-23-2017, 01:06 AM
Replies: 35
Views: 1,226
Posted By kev
Oh dear. How could I have missed what means so...

Oh dear. How could I have missed what means so much to you, yet I saw as weaker lines than the rest, so pulled them out along with your meaning. Thanks for the clarity in your response.

I've been...
Forum: Poetry 08-22-2017, 08:26 AM
Replies: 35
Views: 1,226
Posted By kev
Icon7 Pulling out lines again Grace. Take me some...

Pulling out lines again Grace.

Take me some place I can't think
rock me in your lullaby
play the chords that make me cry
hold me whilst I sleep.

Take me some place I'm not me
no thoughts to...
Forum: Poetry 08-22-2017, 07:52 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 704
Posted By kev
Agree with Grace. last two lines jumped out at...

Agree with Grace.
last two lines jumped out at me.

Did you ever do anything with the peacock poem, Leila. That could be a cracker.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-22-2017, 07:41 AM
Replies: 98
Views: 2,586
Posted By kev
I miss Nick Pierce, cos I like him.................

I miss Nick Pierce, cos I like him.............. Myers. Did you catch Love, it's complicated. Nick at his best. A simple poem but carries weight.
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