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Forum: Fiction 02-06-2017, 01:30 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,216
Posted By max crash
“Lee!” she snapped, “What’s going on?” {Her...

“Lee!” she snapped, “What’s going on?”

{Her husband} didn’t answer.

Megan leant over to peer at the time, before flopping down with exaggerated annoyance.

{ I think 'he' would work better...
Forum: Fiction 02-01-2017, 01:37 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,267
Posted By max crash
ok, first things first, you called him golden boy...

ok, first things first, you called him golden boy and then golden Idol - this could be intentional and it would work but I thought you might want to know.

goons's is goons' no second s

I...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 01-22-2017, 09:16 AM
Replies: 120
Views: 4,864
Posted By max crash
another call for help -- this is no joke- I have...

another call for help -- this is no joke- I have all but lost access to the forum and this is a serious question, the last post I see is the 16 and I had to get to this place in a very strange way so...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 01-22-2017, 09:09 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,057
Posted By max crash
working

is this working

i'm not able to get anything, the site doesn't really come up.


johnymc@hotmail.com , send me a message if you get this.



max crash
Forum: Fiction 12-15-2016, 11:09 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,380
Posted By max crash
Tortured Souls, 1600

the real question about this piece is the intro, I wrote it for myself and am having trouble deleting the front few paragraphs as I intended --- I just can't decide if I should leave them or dump...
Forum: Introductions 12-14-2016, 02:34 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,007
Posted By max crash
I also disagree - because I write as a teen...

I also disagree - because I write as a teen female and i'm a male sexagenarian

but you seem to be having trouble putting yourself in prison, may I suggest that you just create a character, and...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 12-14-2016, 11:35 AM
Replies: 9,066
Views: 244,975
Posted By max crash
Leonard Cohen "Everybody Knows" you'll need...

Leonard Cohen "Everybody Knows"

you'll need one with lyrics he's hard to understand
Forum: Introductions 12-14-2016, 11:18 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,007
Posted By max crash
do a search on - letters to prisoners program. ...

do a search on - letters to prisoners program.

you can write to them and get the real deal. and inspire some very real characters, and some true stores that's if they give you permission to use...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 12-03-2016, 01:52 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,281
Posted By max crash
you're right about getting a handle on the real...

you're right about getting a handle on the real numbers on the insurance.

as retired military I only had to start paying for insurance when I went on social security . 135 per month so i'm...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 12-03-2016, 06:43 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,281
Posted By max crash
dems or reps

are demarcates or republicans more responsive to the needs of the people.

give examples to back your opinion please

I have several examples that form my opinion, but I think ill start with...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 12-03-2016, 06:28 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 3,827
Posted By max crash
just a thought the electoral college is no...

just a thought

the electoral college is no mystery to me I understand it and why it exist but I have a question,

if the college is to keep the densely populated areas from taking over then it...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 12-03-2016, 05:48 AM
Replies: 67
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Views: 4,052
Posted By max crash
I don't know how we got on the subject but I like...

I don't know how we got on the subject but I like it

have you guys ever played any type of building game on the computer - like Civilization - the original, I know the dark ages of computers -...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-30-2016, 06:04 PM
Replies: 67
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Views: 4,052
Posted By max crash
I looked at your debt clock and there is a lot of...

I looked at your debt clock and there is a lot of numbers there.

but the 104 tril in "That's debt plus other unfunded liabilities." is the biggest farce you've tried to pull off yet. those are...
Forum: Introductions 11-28-2016, 09:14 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,435
Posted By max crash
i don't see and address

i don't see and address
Forum: Fiction 11-27-2016, 01:21 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 716
Posted By max crash
the post is 'excerpt from Fur Run' in the...

the post is 'excerpt from Fur Run' in the members only section, tell me what you think.
Forum: Fiction 11-27-2016, 11:51 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 899
Posted By max crash
i'm sorry if I came across angry - i'm not - but...

i'm sorry if I came across angry - i'm not - but even in your second reply you didn't say what you thought was wrong with the story, I can't fix something when I see nothing wrong with it, so please...
Forum: Fiction 11-27-2016, 11:28 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 716
Posted By max crash
very realistic, good conversation but it...

very realistic, good conversation

but it had no pizazz, it would make a very nice lull in the action but if you were to extend this to a full story - it could get boring very quickly

I...
Forum: Fiction 11-27-2016, 11:08 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 899
Posted By max crash
ok how else would you approach a bit of fluff...

ok how else would you approach a bit of fluff such as this bit.

it's simply the mental ravings of a madman or maybe not

I can't have a conversation to bring out the information, there is...
Forum: Fiction 11-27-2016, 09:31 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 899
Posted By max crash
it's in the blood, flash, 340 words

It’s all in the blood

I tasted her blood and I knew the time was right. I waited four days after I decided to commit to Ruth. I questioned my state of mind, and my motives for the choice I was...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-23-2016, 07:11 PM
Replies: 67
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Views: 4,052
Posted By max crash
ok the gnp was 6 tril in 1990 --- true the...

ok the gnp was 6 tril in 1990 --- true
the debt was 3.25 mil that's with an m (hard to believe isn't it)


today the gnp is 18 tril

and the debt is 16 trillion

those are facts...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-22-2016, 02:49 PM
Replies: 67
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Views: 4,052
Posted By max crash
just medical, the rec was taken off the ballet by...

just medical, the rec was taken off the ballet by state supreme court

but we can now carry open a hunting knife not to exceed 18 inches right next to our guns every where except in a school...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-22-2016, 11:19 AM
Replies: 67
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Views: 4,052
Posted By max crash
we could now talk about the deficit --- that's...

we could now talk about the deficit --- that's simple too. if you are paying out more money than you are taking in then you have two choices

in this case

one spend less - an since that...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-21-2016, 07:35 PM
Replies: 67
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Views: 4,052
Posted By max crash
I as just responding to mo's comment about...

I as just responding to mo's comment about shrinking government back to 1990, if we did that then it would rise by .3 percent

but to your post, if you look at it that way the gdp was 2.5 times...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-21-2016, 03:40 PM
Replies: 67
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Views: 4,052
Posted By max crash
Facts – you know how I like facts in...

Facts – you know how I like facts

in 1990, The U S budget was about 1 trillion dollars, in today’s dollars that’s 1.827 trillion

The us budget today is about four trillion dollars

...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-20-2016, 03:33 PM
Replies: 67
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Views: 4,052
Posted By max crash
A Dallas church voted to perform gay marriages,...

A Dallas church voted to perform gay marriages, and it’s getting kicked out of the Texas Baptists


this is just the beginning

first hand accounts by me

two of my grandsons ( their mother...
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