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Forum: Fiction 03-25-2017, 09:58 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,010
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
I already have. Thanks for the sage advice...

I already have. Thanks for the sage advice though. I mean: 'think of something better...' how more stimulating can advice get?
Forum: Fiction 03-25-2017, 07:49 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,010
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
In regards to your first suggestion, I think it...

In regards to your first suggestion, I think it makes a lot of sense. I'm going to try to re-work this piece soon to incorporate it. So thanks for the crit.

But potboilers don't necessarily...
Forum: Fiction 03-25-2017, 07:41 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,010
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
I'll add in those edits to my word document....

I'll add in those edits to my word document. Thanks for catching them. Adventure and wacky over the top characters is exactly what I imagine will punctuate this story when I'm finished with it. I...
Forum: Fiction 03-25-2017, 10:20 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,010
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
Alright. I've edited the original post. You're...

Alright. I've edited the original post. You're right, there were comma splices everywhere in the piece. Not exactly sure what I was thinking. I probably deleted about 20 or so. There might be some...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-23-2017, 03:16 PM
Replies: 56
Views: 2,797
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
How poetic of you Nick. Don't think I...

How poetic of you Nick.



Don't think I have it in me to put you all out of your misery. Suppose I'll just linger for a bit, before inconspicuously wandering off again.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-23-2017, 02:19 PM
Replies: 56
Views: 2,797
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
So is this forum dead yet?

I logged on for the first time in a while, only to see broken links all over the place and not too many posts.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-23-2017, 02:15 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 3,577
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
That sounds worse than any substance addiction I...

That sounds worse than any substance addiction I can imagine Nick.
Forum: Fiction 03-23-2017, 02:07 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,010
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
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Robert Green knew he was a failure.

Maybe that's why it didn't surprise him. Maybe all that surprised him was it hadn't happened sooner. Whatever it was, the news - his wife's revelation...
Forum: Free Writing 07-22-2016, 11:12 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 831
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
PBR = Pabst Blue Ribbon.

PBR = Pabst Blue Ribbon.
Forum: Introductions 07-20-2016, 05:10 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 865
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
Where about in Canada are you from? I'm currently...

Where about in Canada are you from? I'm currently stranded out in the central prairies, but spend most of my year in Ontario these days.
Forum: The Library 07-20-2016, 05:06 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 9,309
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
I tend to be fond of non-fiction books that...

I tend to be fond of non-fiction books that recount a good investigative journalism story. A couple that are sitting around my room right now are:

Betrayal - The Boston Globe
Crazy town - Robyn...
Forum: Free Writing 07-15-2016, 12:26 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 695
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
Amsterdam

I am twenty-one years old and am walking through the streets of Amsterdam. I’ve been in Europe a couple weeks, although the exact amount of time escapes me at the moment.

I’d sold it to my...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-14-2016, 09:35 AM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,442
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
"Do you follow that if a statement is made like...

"Do you follow that if a statement is made like black lives matter then the opposite is assumed to be true. White lives don't."

No, I dont. It's also a fallacy.

This is pointless. As I said...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-14-2016, 09:10 AM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,442
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
How? How on earth could it be misconstrued as...

How? How on earth could it be misconstrued as racist? I'm genuinely perplexed how this could confuse anyone. Either black lives do matter, or they don't. Those are the options.
Forum: Tips & Advice 07-14-2016, 08:35 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 6,069
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
Wrc, Kerouac certainly wrote with a plan in...

Wrc,

Kerouac certainly wrote with a plan in mind. It was to take Benzedrine and stay up for a week straight and see where his drug addled and sleep deprived mind took him. The result was 'on the...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-14-2016, 08:22 AM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,442
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
It absolutely baffles me that anyone could take...

It absolutely baffles me that anyone could take issue with the slogan 'black lives matter.' Black lives do matter. It's a very simple statement and the fact that so many white Americans take issue...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-13-2016, 01:21 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 991
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
Thanks to both you of for taking the time to...

Thanks to both you of for taking the time to respond. I ended up submitting it today, along with another piece of mine. In the end I went with my gut, as far as the style/tense is concerned.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-12-2016, 11:04 AM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,442
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
"Get over it." Well, I'm a white guy from...

"Get over it."

Well, I'm a white guy from Canada so there really isn't a whole lot for me to get over Max.

I have a 5pm deadline today and have work I need to get to, but would be curious if...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-11-2016, 09:40 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,442
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
"They don't grow 'fros like that anymore." ...

"They don't grow 'fros like that anymore."

Indeed they don't Binx.

Anyways, I really haven't objected to anything you've said in this thread. Your contributions to it have been nothing other...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-11-2016, 09:25 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,442
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
What do you have against Angela Davis? Or what's...

What do you have against Angela Davis? Or what's wrong with having a photo of her as one's avatar?
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-11-2016, 09:10 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,442
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
I wasn't being angular or provocative for it's...

I wasn't being angular or provocative for it's own sake; I feel it's not only a relevant sentiment, but an accurate one as well.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-11-2016, 08:03 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,442
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
I doubt it will win me any friends, but as far as...

I doubt it will win me any friends, but as far as the Dallas attacks go it is relevant. I'll just leave this quote here:

"A slave-owner who through cunning and violence shackles a slave in chains,...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-11-2016, 09:24 AM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,442
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
If you're looking for a 'cause & effect' catalyst...

If you're looking for a 'cause & effect' catalyst that pushed Micah Johnson over the edge, then look no further than the two most recent murders of black men that directly preceded the events.

Of...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-10-2016, 07:47 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,442
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
Why would black lives matter have any culpability...

Why would black lives matter have any culpability in the Dallas attacks?
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-10-2016, 06:56 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 991
Posted By copenhagen_dipz
I need some help.

I've been polishing up an old short story I once posted on here. I plan on entering it into a writing contest soon. I'm not sure why Ive been having difficulty sorting through it, but I can't seem to...
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