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Forum: Poetry 07-25-2011, 02:56 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 491
Posted By stellarworld
Your AAAA,BBBB,CCCC,DDDD rhyme scheme was fulled...

Your AAAA,BBBB,CCCC,DDDD rhyme scheme was fulled some very meaty imagery.
--was my favorite line.

Thanks! That was a good read :)
Forum: Poetry 07-25-2011, 01:52 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 778
Posted By stellarworld
This is a very thought-provoking piece. It says...

This is a very thought-provoking piece. It says alot in a few words. It makes me think about physical fertility/futility. I interpreted it as a metaphor for the human aging process and although the...
Forum: Poetry 07-25-2011, 01:38 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 555
Posted By stellarworld
JoeMatt, Actually it's not meant to be...

JoeMatt,
Actually it's not meant to be "lover-wanting", it's meant to be "red-breasted lover, wanting friend". I hope that clears up any confusion.

Thank you both for reading and commenting- I...
Forum: Poetry 07-24-2011, 08:54 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 2,453
Posted By stellarworld
This was an exciting piece. Even though it's...

This was an exciting piece. Even though it's about stillness it stirred me. I love that simple idea of 'still' or 'stillness'. You personify it well. It is far and away. And it is growing. Good...
Forum: Introductions 07-23-2011, 04:47 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 696
Posted By stellarworld
Haha! that's funny. Welcome foxanthony, ...

Haha! that's funny.

Welcome foxanthony,
It's good to have you here. I hope you enjoy reading as much as you enjoy posting. We have some talented writers and some "up-and-comers". So we can learn...
Forum: Introductions 07-23-2011, 04:43 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 464
Posted By stellarworld
Welcome Ponder, Glad you join in on all the...

Welcome Ponder,
Glad you join in on all the fun. :) We're looking forward to reading your posts. I know what you mean. I write off/on as well. (mostly off) But it's a rewarding hobby because the...
Forum: Poetry 07-23-2011, 02:29 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 852
Posted By stellarworld
Yes. You have an amazing memory!

Yes. You have an amazing memory!
Forum: Poetry 07-23-2011, 08:45 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 695
Posted By stellarworld
Please keep in mind that's just my opinion....

Please keep in mind that's just my opinion. Personally, I find that a good closing line is a reflection or revisition of a previously stated idea in the context of the poem.

For example you...
Forum: Introductions 07-23-2011, 08:24 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 681
Posted By stellarworld
Welcome Sameer, This a great place for you...

Welcome Sameer,

This a great place for you to better yourself as a writer. We are glad you are part of our community and I want to encourage you to help others as well. Here you can use your...
Forum: Introductions 07-23-2011, 08:18 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 507
Posted By stellarworld
Hi Paul, Glad you are here. SciFi is a great...

Hi Paul, Glad you are here. SciFi is a great genre to get into. Sometimes the process of posting and giving criticism can be just as important as the actual book writing process. So kick off your...
Forum: Introductions 07-23-2011, 08:15 AM
Replies: 1
Hi
Views: 535
Posted By stellarworld
Welcome Sakampa, So glad you are here. Hone...

Welcome Sakampa,
So glad you are here. Hone away. Please don't be afraid to give and get constructive criticism. That's how we writers may challenge eachother. That's how we get stronger as writers....
Forum: Introductions 07-23-2011, 08:13 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 565
Posted By stellarworld
Welcome Carallyne, Please post your work so we...

Welcome Carallyne,
Please post your work so we can enjoy it. This is a good place to work on your weaknesses. So if it is grammar, don't be afraid to ask for grammar critiques when you post your...
Forum: Poetry 07-23-2011, 08:10 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 695
Posted By stellarworld
This is a clever poem with alot of exposition. I...

This is a clever poem with alot of exposition. I half expected the protagonist to wake up on the train still en route to his destination with the waltz on Heaven's platform being a wishful dream.
...
Forum: Poetry 07-23-2011, 07:59 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 555
Posted By stellarworld
covetous robin

covetous robin
atop the fence
perched
turning your head

for what do you search?

self-centeredness
tells me
it is me
Forum: Poetry 07-23-2011, 07:50 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 564
Posted By stellarworld
Cuchulian Thank you for reading and commenting....

Cuchulian
Thank you for reading and commenting. I too am a fan of poetry with little or no rhyme, so I know exactly what you are saying. It seems to be a poets preference. And mine seems to be...
Forum: Poetry 07-21-2011, 01:21 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,165
Posted By stellarworld
Thank you Nadja. It's good to be back, even if...

Thank you Nadja. It's good to be back, even if for a short while. I've still been writing, just very inconsistent on this forum. I've been reading you and noticed that your pieces have gotten...
Forum: Poetry 07-21-2011, 01:09 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 828
Posted By stellarworld
Ahh yes, the idea. It can be so elusive and...

Ahh yes, the idea. It can be so elusive and unpredictable (and apparently has a taste for dairy products). A very entertaining piece. I enjoy poetry that reads like prose. I also found it...
Forum: Poetry 07-21-2011, 12:48 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 564
Posted By stellarworld
A Notion

a notion
swiftly left me
just as quick as
it had come

a runner

as a thought
had just begun
Forum: Poetry 07-21-2011, 12:44 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 852
Posted By stellarworld
Thank you for your kind words :)

Thank you for your kind words :)
Forum: Poetry 07-18-2011, 05:20 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 689
Posted By stellarworld
This was a very interesting piece. If it hadn't...

This was a very interesting piece. If it hadn't been for the first 2 stanzas, I would have thought it was a day at a loathsome orphanage. To me it seems as though it could be two seperate poems...
Forum: Poetry 07-18-2011, 05:09 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,060
Posted By stellarworld
This is a poem that just paints itself across the...

This is a poem that just paints itself across the mind. The imagery was vivid and it sort of unfolded as I read the words aloud:

I noticed that there were alot of facial features described...
Forum: Poetry 07-18-2011, 04:57 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 852
Posted By stellarworld
Sweet Tooth

~Sweet tooth~




Chocolate
dark delight
of tongue a cheek
could grow
to love
Forum: Poetry 07-18-2011, 04:49 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 633
Posted By stellarworld
A very enjoyable piece. That's one of my favorite...

A very enjoyable piece. That's one of my favorite form: 4 lines per 4 stanzas.
Forum: Poetry 07-18-2011, 01:41 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 501
Posted By stellarworld
Yes, thank you. Actually it should be 'was gone'....

Yes, thank you. Actually it should be 'was gone'.

It's about a woman giving the news of a break up. The basket represents a sad feeling that in this case was the basket that held the bad news....
Forum: Poetry 07-17-2011, 09:17 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 560
Posted By stellarworld
Agreed. Very humorous and well-written. Thanks :)...

Agreed. Very humorous and well-written. Thanks :) And no we aren't that different.
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