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Forum: Poetry 04-05-2014, 11:56 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 737
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English. A Bachelor's. Only thing I think I ever...

English. A Bachelor's. Only thing I think I ever could study. Not much employment with it, but oh well, I guess.
Forum: Poetry 04-05-2014, 09:31 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 737
Posted By Error69
Started waitering, going to be studying at the...

Started waitering, going to be studying at the same time. Don't have any qualifications at my age, not yet, so it has to be the kind of the work I'd rather not do. But oh well...
Forum: Poetry 04-03-2014, 08:51 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 737
Posted By Error69
To answer your first question, I got sick, then I...

To answer your first question, I got sick, then I got a new job, and then my internet broke. But now I'm back.

As for your word shortening, I remember suggesting before, why not add in a sort of...
Forum: Poetry 04-03-2014, 09:36 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 744
Posted By Error69
Make war, not love, Tor... wait, I think I got...

Make war, not love, Tor... wait, I think I got that one wrong.
Forum: Poetry 04-03-2014, 08:26 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 744
Posted By Error69
Mister Haiku at work yet again, but you're far...

Mister Haiku at work yet again, but you're far from Valentines Day, Tor... why the love, man? Anyway, as for the poem, it's as a haiku should be: short and to the point.

Another short and sweet...
Forum: Poetry 04-03-2014, 08:22 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 737
Posted By Error69
The first line immediately reminded me of that...

The first line immediately reminded me of that one song, but I pushed past the bad thoughts that came with remembering the song and was glad to find that your style and such has remained as it was...
Forum: Board Games 02-13-2014, 08:31 PM
Replies: 12,429
Views: 244,537
Posted By Error69
You

You
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-13-2014, 03:34 AM
Replies: 49
Views: 4,658
Posted By Error69
I kind of meant they all die at the end by "Romeo...

I kind of meant they all die at the end by "Romeo & Juliet model". Doesn't really matter where they go afterwards to me.
Forum: Poetry 02-13-2014, 03:21 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 419
Posted By Error69
Finally Over (A lot of swearing)

To reiterate: There is a lot of swearing in this poem, and please don't tell me that the swearing is over the top, because that was the intention.

It's over!
It's fucking finished!
Done! Done!...
Forum: Board Games 02-13-2014, 02:52 AM
Replies: 12,429
Views: 244,537
Posted By Error69
Spore (Mayhaps so...)

Spore

(Mayhaps so...)
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-13-2014, 02:50 AM
Replies: 49
Views: 4,658
Posted By Error69
I said that I'd try coming up with something, and...

I said that I'd try coming up with something, and you never know, maybe I am all gushy inside. I mean, I have always enjoyed love stories, and I know that a lot of people I know think that I'm gay...
Forum: Board Games 02-13-2014, 02:17 AM
Replies: 12,429
Views: 244,537
Posted By Error69
Awesome (Mayhaps... ha ha ha.)

Awesome

(Mayhaps... ha ha ha.)
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-13-2014, 02:16 AM
Replies: 49
Views: 4,658
Posted By Error69
The closest I came to writing about romance was...

The closest I came to writing about romance was really just sex. People tend to prefer acting as if it's all about the actual romance. Also, I don't like the colour red. Prefer purple.

I'm just...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-12-2014, 11:46 PM
Replies: 49
Views: 4,658
Posted By Error69
I'll stab love with a corrugated shard of the...

I'll stab love with a corrugated shard of the Titanic... anyway, I can't write love poems.
Forum: Board Games 02-12-2014, 11:44 PM
Replies: 12,429
Views: 244,537
Posted By Error69
Arthur (The fifth one is by far the worst,...

Arthur

(The fifth one is by far the worst, seeing as there are two after that, they don't get any worse.)
Forum: Poetry 02-12-2014, 10:09 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 436
Posted By Error69
"Lightning", not "lightening". Unless you were...

"Lightning", not "lightening". Unless you were talking about light rather than about electrical lightning.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 02-12-2014, 09:48 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 883
Posted By Error69
I know that, but I thought that he may have been...

I know that, but I thought that he may have been referring to some type of writing style I've never heard of before. That's why I wanted to be sure first, I'm not going to give thoughts on writing a...
Forum: Poetry 02-12-2014, 09:45 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 505
Posted By Error69
Red: Is "busman" a word, I've always just said...

Red: Is "busman" a word, I've always just said "bus driver" or something. Perhaps try finding something else that has the same number of syllables so that it can compare with "postman" as you did...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-12-2014, 08:53 PM
Replies: 48
Views: 3,875
Posted By Error69
I was just thinking about this kind of thing......

I was just thinking about this kind of thing... made me laugh.

http://recoveryroadmap.com/Images/Cartoons/Self-Aware-Calvin%26Hobbes.jpg...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 02-12-2014, 08:49 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 883
Posted By Error69
What is free running in a novel? A quick internet...

What is free running in a novel? A quick internet search gave me nothing. The only "free running" I know is of the parkour variety, is that what you meant?
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-12-2014, 08:46 PM
Replies: 49
Views: 4,658
Posted By Error69
I've only written one love poem, I don't want to...

I've only written one love poem, I don't want to post it again, so I'll just put the link here if you wish to see it, Nacia. But that's all I've got in the way of anything focusing on romance:
...
Forum: Poetry 02-12-2014, 08:42 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 518
Posted By Error69
I gave my heart away once... it hurt... stupid...

I gave my heart away once... it hurt... stupid mafia surgery. Anyway, onto the poem:



I would recommend contraction here. The second line feels a little too long, and so removing a syllable...
Forum: Poetry 02-12-2014, 08:37 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 598
Posted By Error69
I do this too, but you do know that if you leave...

I do this too, but you do know that if you leave a project to the last minute you'll be older and therefore wiser. Silver lining in everything and all that jazz.

Anyway, nice use of enjambment,...
Forum: Poetry 02-12-2014, 08:24 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 467
Posted By Error69
Meant to be freak's for possession.

Meant to be freak's for possession.
Forum: Board Games 02-12-2014, 08:05 PM
Replies: 12,429
Views: 244,537
Posted By Error69
Wizard (You're wrong there, Aric. The...

Wizard

(You're wrong there, Aric. The fifth one is the absolute worst, gets marginally better after that. Marginally.)
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