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Forum: Poetry 05-25-2016, 04:07 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 288
Posted By escorial
the bard

to feel normal
to stay hopeful
to care
to love
to be
or not to be
shakespeare got it
spot on....
Forum: Poetry 05-25-2016, 04:03 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 614
Posted By escorial
thankyou Nacia and sophileo

thankyou Nacia and sophileo
Forum: Poetry 05-21-2016, 11:42 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 614
Posted By escorial
guns

I read
a farmer shot himself
as so many do
and there are kids
who live on council estates
that will shoot someone else
instead.......
Forum: Poetry 03-05-2016, 08:38 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,909
Posted By escorial
well man i've read it a few times now...cool...

well man i've read it a few times now...cool piece man
Forum: Poetry 03-03-2016, 11:34 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,909
Posted By escorial
The familiarity I think of is just that...not a...

The familiarity I think of is just that...not a feeling I've read something similar but that if I feel a poem I read feels familiar to me it's because I connect with the words and meaning....I do...
Forum: Poetry 02-28-2016, 01:40 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 464
Posted By escorial
3 stanza's that are so dif but work so well...

3 stanza's that are so dif but work so well together...cool
Forum: Poetry 02-28-2016, 07:58 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,909
Posted By escorial
don't know...it just had that quality of being a...

don't know...it just had that quality of being a very familiar piece often because i think i would have liked to have wrote that...
Forum: Poetry 02-28-2016, 07:15 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,909
Posted By escorial
sounds familiar but that is always a sign i liked...

sounds familiar but that is always a sign i liked it so.....
Forum: Poetry 02-21-2016, 11:11 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 652
Posted By escorial
the middle is a muddle but i get the feeling that...

the middle is a muddle but i get the feeling that may have been the aim....cool
Forum: Poetry 02-21-2016, 11:10 AM
Replies: 42
Views: 3,245
Posted By escorial
effortless read with a certain amount of whit and...

effortless read with a certain amount of whit and cowardice..cool
Forum: Poetry 02-20-2016, 03:19 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 511
Posted By escorial
thanks Kev....filling in the gaps is a good thing...

thanks Kev....filling in the gaps is a good thing i reckon...cheers man

idrew s1 and s2....not sure on that but... i enjoyed reading it that way...thankyou
Forum: Poetry 02-20-2016, 12:55 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 511
Posted By escorial
i do like a certain sparseness in my poetry...

i do like a certain sparseness in my poetry LP.....yeah..how much do you express and how much is not enough...thanks
Forum: Poetry 02-20-2016, 12:28 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 511
Posted By escorial
The End

What might be
your final image,
the tears of a loved one,
your murderer's face
dying in a dark empty room?


In a room full of light,
you could be sitting
or lying down
Forum: Poetry 01-09-2016, 07:26 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 504
Posted By escorial
has a inner turmoil feel..enjoyed

has a inner turmoil feel..enjoyed
Forum: Poetry 01-09-2016, 06:39 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 796
Posted By escorial
is....good

is....good
Forum: Poetry 01-05-2016, 02:16 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 973
Posted By escorial
the reference to 1965 was in response to...

the reference to 1965 was in response to niewojfan reply...I tried to put the video link up were simon vineknoog shouted out love,love,love.....it made me smile
Forum: Poetry 01-01-2016, 05:33 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 973
Posted By escorial
..i don't know....

..i don't know....
Forum: Poetry 01-01-2016, 12:16 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 973
Posted By escorial
were you at the royal albert hall in 1965

were you at the royal albert hall in 1965
Forum: Poetry 12-31-2015, 05:23 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 973
Posted By escorial
vertigo

never
during
sex
but
when
making
love
Forum: Poetry 12-19-2015, 06:26 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 516
Posted By escorial
like the it's...

like the it's...
Forum: Poetry 12-13-2015, 08:03 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,166
Posted By escorial
one always takes these pieces as...

one always takes these pieces as personal...with..i'll..i..ect...i like the sentiment expressed
Forum: Poetry 12-13-2015, 07:51 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 763
Posted By escorial
i really do like short direct pieces..an this is...

i really do like short direct pieces..an this is one
Forum: Poetry 12-12-2015, 10:00 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 455
Posted By escorial
the second stanza is a twister...easier to read...

the second stanza is a twister...easier to read then say...enjoyed
Forum: Poetry 12-12-2015, 07:03 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 683
Posted By escorial
I do change things and read all comments...I'd...

I do change things and read all comments...I'd say both LP..cheers
Forum: Poetry 12-12-2015, 06:35 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 683
Posted By escorial
I'm OK with the piece as it is LP....thanks

I'm OK with the piece as it is LP....thanks
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