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Forum: Introductions 11-08-2013, 03:13 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,461
Posted By puresnow
Thank you for linking me. I suggested to students...

Thank you for linking me. I suggested to students during my presentation to write to Writers' beat forum. I am glad you took up my suggestion. I now write using my real name. ann kit suet Chin-chan.
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-28-2009, 02:26 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,544
Posted By puresnow
Icon7 Thanks Peter

Hi Peter,

You are talking exactly what my Chinese Doctor was telling me. So I am going to try the Chinese massage for a while every week.

I have had the traditional physio and accupuncture....
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-27-2009, 09:58 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,010
Posted By puresnow
Icon7 Thanks

Thank you all, Thanks Shelly about the Pink research.

I just remembered, 24 years ago, I delivered my first child at National Women's hospital in Auckland New Zealand. They just renovated a Pink...
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-27-2009, 01:45 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,544
Posted By puresnow
Icon8 Yes, I am not straight

I just went to my Chinese Doctor for a Chinese massage. My 30 year old chronic sore neck and back has unusually recurred in summer. (yes, it's summer here in the Southern hemisphere) The problem is...
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-24-2009, 11:26 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,010
Posted By puresnow
Icon9 Pink Shirt Day: 25 February 2009

All decked in pink for a good cause. This was what I wore to the community centre to teach adults students English as a second language and to school where I teach little primary school children.
...
Forum: Fiction 12-11-2008, 12:49 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 770
Posted By puresnow
Hi mama23nluv, I agree with Neil about your...

Hi mama23nluv,

I agree with Neil about your use of words. I will not repeat. Was it when you downloaded your story that you lost the paragraphs of the dialogue?

red: delete
blue:insert...
Forum: Poetry 12-10-2008, 02:14 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 637
Posted By puresnow
Icon7 Thanks

Thanks Oldhag and Tarnish, I like your comments.

Can some one please advice the spelling of the word piruettes and pirouettes. May be Queen? Are they English and French spelling? I have checked,...
Forum: Poetry 12-10-2008, 12:06 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 637
Posted By puresnow
Icon7 Dreams

I wanted to go England,
and be a Beatrice Potter,
and write lots of famous books.

I wanted to go Russia,
and be a bolshoi ballet dancer,
and do piruettes.

I wanted to go France,
and be a...
Forum: Non-Fiction 11-22-2008, 10:52 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,736
Posted By puresnow
Icon7 Cinderella's step sisters

Sometimes it is good to have a laugh about ourselves.

My husband was comparing his size thirteen ugly feet with mine. I joke that he has Cinderella's step sisters' feet. He retorts that I am no...
Forum: Fiction 11-11-2008, 12:34 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,922
Posted By puresnow
Thank you August_squall, Hoilei and Starrbright, ...

Thank you August_squall, Hoilei and Starrbright,

I have finally edited my story bearing in mind all your suggestions. Sorry it took so long. I actually have an idea that Greg couldn't bear seeing...
Forum: Non-Fiction 11-10-2008, 08:07 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 749
Posted By puresnow
Koru

On Labour day, my husband and I and our twelve year old son headed out west to Bethells beach. The drive is an hour and we had to drive through the windy road to the other side of the Waitakeres.
...
Forum: Fiction 11-08-2008, 08:24 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,379
Posted By puresnow
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Forum: Fiction 10-28-2008, 09:41 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 973
Posted By puresnow
Hi Lorissa, I can identify with Julie, and...

Hi Lorissa,

I can identify with Julie, and in the old days, people like her were called Old Maids.

SynonymousWords had done a very thorough critique and I agree with her with your long...
Forum: Fiction 09-22-2008, 09:13 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,922
Posted By puresnow
Hi all, I have ended my story with Gerg not...

Hi all,

I have ended my story with Gerg not wanting to carry out the euthanisia. I am half minded whether to finish the story here or to continue with him doing it and going to jail. Shall...
Forum: Fiction 09-22-2008, 08:48 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,922
Posted By puresnow
“You promised me! You promised me!” Greg heard...

“You promised me! You promised me!” Greg heard Felicity sob inconsolably while unsuccessfully trying to stifle her cries with her shaky hands. Even with her slurred speech, the words pierced his ears...
Forum: Fiction 09-15-2008, 02:18 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,635
Posted By puresnow
Hi Lemex, Thanks for a good read. I presume...

Hi Lemex,

Thanks for a good read. I presume you are using British spelling and hence your word recognised is correct. I base my assumption on your reference to the Falklands War. Like Rozaline...
Forum: Fiction 09-13-2008, 10:30 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,922
Posted By puresnow
Icon7 Thanks,

Thanks Ashlockusmc,

I am thinking in my mind how to edit my story with all your input.

I haven't read the book, "May I Cross Your Golden River". I surfed for it this morning, and will try to...
Forum: Fiction 09-07-2008, 08:41 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,922
Posted By puresnow
Thanks

Thanks Mathmission, Hoilei and Rozaline for your critique. Thanks especially to Hoilei for her time. I am glad you like the gist of the story.

This post was rather short, I should have mentioned...
Forum: Fiction 09-06-2008, 11:28 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,922
Posted By puresnow
You promised me.

“You promised me! You promised me!” Greg heard Felicity sob inconsolably while trying to stifle her cries. Even with her slurred speech, the words pierced his ears like a sharp needle.

Greg’s...
Forum: Fiction 09-05-2008, 10:27 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,243
Posted By puresnow
Critique

Hi Cecilia,

Good luck with the magazine. You might like to edit your story again. personally, I find that this recount for a two year old is a little unrealistic. Other people may have a...
Forum: Non-Fiction 08-20-2008, 03:10 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,522
Posted By puresnow
Hi Chloe, Good luck on your article with the...

Hi Chloe,

Good luck on your article with the magazine.

THE SMALL STUFF (THAT ADDS UP)

1. Buy a thermos instead of buying coffee.

6. Play a game at www.freerice.com and donate to charity.
Forum: Fiction 06-03-2008, 02:25 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 709
Posted By puresnow
[QUOTE=Ataxia;128688]Chapter two of the story. ...

[QUOTE=Ataxia;128688]Chapter two of the story.
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Hi Ataxia,

Perhaps you should have a disclaimer like you did for your Transition I post that there are vulgar words in the...
Forum: Fiction 06-03-2008, 02:03 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,178
Posted By puresnow
Icon7 critique

Thank you for a good read. Will we get o read more?

Puresnow
Forum: Fiction 05-25-2008, 12:59 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,253
Posted By puresnow
Hi Annabelle, I love weddings and thank you...

Hi Annabelle,

I love weddings and thank you for a good read.


I agree with Devon about Antony's age. As a mum and a teacher in a primary school, I guess writing with blocks seems to be too...
Forum: Tips & Advice 05-24-2008, 09:35 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 3,727
Posted By puresnow
Hi lacy, This is a very helpful piece. Is...

Hi lacy,

This is a very helpful piece. Is there any way this is posted again so people can read it.

"If you can not say something nicely, then do not say anything at all." If everyone follows...
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