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Old 02-18-2015, 07:24 AM
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it seems to me that Mr. Phillips has grown a third dimension just in the day or two you have thought about him.

I think you may be finding yourself Mac, (although I think Phil would be a better choice of the new you) it looks good on ya, and I can see you as the co-star of this story - maybe even as the detective that unmask Scott for what he is --- or isn't.

Cwylldren, you may have to rein Phil in or --- well rewrites are a bitch.

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