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Old 03-03-2018, 06:38 AM
Beesauce (Offline)
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Thanks Nick. Of course you've got the time to fix the spacers . Thanks

SpS! Of course you'd want the farts! But sorry, the man is sitting in a dungeon and its vomit and metallic blood he tastes mixed with the exhallation of the toxins of alcohol seeping out his sweaty pores.

Hows that for a second draft add on? Except, I was hoping to narrow it down by 28 words, rounded out to 500 makes for a very precise published short story. Thanks guyss
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