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Old 05-13-2018, 01:29 PM
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Originally Posted by Prodigalson View Post
Yep, it sounds about right for a head-on. You might add something about the incredible amount of debris, and the area it covers, like there'd been an explosion; and the glass, everywhere. Something about having to weave through the debris field, or something.

First I wanna get the whole thing posted.
Then Gallo has to copy it from the site onto his printer.
Then I'm gonna give it a read through and see if it is workable as a short story.

Meanwhile, I'm savin' up for a Then Came Bronson watchcap.
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