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Old 08-24-2015, 12:29 AM
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The man got in his car, still angry, and drove to the old house, pedal down. He walked up to the door with a quick pace, and knocked hard enough to make the wreath shake. The door swung open before he could bang on it again.
Ooooooo! How about even stronger?:

"The man stormed off to his car, got in, and roared toward the old house, pedal to the floor. Once there, he marched up to the front door and pounded on it with his fist, shaking the wreath. The door was flung open before he could bang on it again."

What an angry man! (Sorry, folks. I haven't written in AGES!!)
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