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Old 11-21-2013, 04:34 AM
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Default Plot line.

Sorry mai, the story line is not interesting.

It takes too long to get started, nothing really dramatic happens, it deals with a specialized topicódrug testingóthat has limited appeal, and has no memorable characters with whom an audience can identify. And to top it off, even your plot outline is full of backstory.

Start something new.
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