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Old 10-31-2016, 05:47 PM
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Ill drink to yalls drinking

And yes you would know who she is and the world at large, from Lyubotyn to Chihuahua but what exactly she or anyone else thought of anything you wouldnt know as none but the central character, the pilot, was given interiority.

In this novel you lose even that organizing intellect as none are given interiority but you will have of course people speaking and since the focus of this novel is exclusively on Dachni youll see her talking to herself from time to time in her broken aphasia.

Years from now when the rough draft is done I'll go back and edit out anything that too directly gives away her state of mind. Id like to keep that, as much as possible, a mystery. Therell be a number of times when you know without doubt whats going through her head but those instances should be rare.
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