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Old 12-01-2014, 02:45 AM
juicyfruit (Offline)
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Very relatable poem. I like how you chose to break up the lines, reading to me like the cycle of thoughts in my head when I have bright eyes looking up at me too. It's a sweet and touching poem.
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