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Old 09-08-2017, 08:04 PM
JesseK1213 (Offline)
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I like it but it's not enough. The writing is good - punchy, like Grace said. But there's just not enough for a story. This feels more like an introduction.

I've been impressed by and have thoroughly enjoyed your writing. I just wish you'd finish.
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