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Old 04-30-2017, 10:57 AM
IanG (Offline)
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I'm not very young but I've been under stress recently, which perhaps shows in the writing. I think I tried too hard to make it bright as a reaction against that. Thanks for a constructive critique, I've done a bit of editing in response.
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