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Old 08-03-2017, 07:48 PM
brianpatrick (Offline)
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I'm not sure what this is. I like how you do 'slice of life' shit, but this one seems incomplete.

Oh yeah, the sentences are good, but the ending doesn't give me much.

I was expecting the friend to kill him and collect that life insurance. But that's just me.
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