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Old 01-02-2016, 10:53 PM
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Okay thanks for the input. Well so far I think only one reader point that plot hole out so maybe it's not as big of a deal so far.

Originally Posted by daes13 View Post
Just because they listen in doesn't mean they have to understand:

"Yeah, man this fine ass girl's coming over tonight. She's like an 8."

"I need an eightball of cocaine delivered to my house."

Looking for reality in fiction is pedantic bullshit. Always think about Coleridge: "The willing suspense of disbelief." As long as it's good no one cares.
I can't have them talk in code though, because I want them to be caught, or I want the villain's to lose. If they speak in code, it cannot hold up in court.

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