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Old 01-02-2016, 10:53 PM
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Okay thanks for the input. Well so far I think only one reader point that plot hole out so maybe it's not as big of a deal so far.

Originally Posted by daes13 View Post
Just because they listen in doesn't mean they have to understand:

"Yeah, man this fine ass girl's coming over tonight. She's like an 8."

Translation:
"I need an eightball of cocaine delivered to my house."

Looking for reality in fiction is pedantic bullshit. Always think about Coleridge: "The willing suspense of disbelief." As long as it's good no one cares.
I can't have them talk in code though, because I want them to be caught, or I want the villain's to lose. If they speak in code, it cannot hold up in court.

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