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Old 01-07-2016, 04:40 PM
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Basically the gang is responsible for a series of kidnappings, and the stash is the equipment used in the kidnappings.

I was told that they didn't buy that they would go to get rid of it, if they knew the cops were after them, and instead they would just not touch it.

I think part of the problem with writing this, might be that the gang has to fall for a second trap. The police fail in their first trap, in the second act, but now they have to fall for one in the third act in order to go down.

But when the gang has already fallen for the first trap, it's difficult to write them falling for the second, without making them look stupid, since they were not fooled successfully the first time.

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