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Old 01-15-2013, 12:42 PM
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Originally Posted by Lin View Post
So beefy,
is that a poem you want critiqued?
It's probably better than most of your work, but could still use some tweaking.
My girlfriend thinks it's adorable.

Dear Lin,
your girl probably looks like a horse.
Also, at least she has the sense not to marry you.

-Beer Fart.
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