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Old 02-15-2018, 11:39 AM
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Originally Posted by DwayneA View Post
I've been thinking that I need to change some of the ideas above to make them fit. He'll still be a nyctophobic, still dreams of being an actual detective, and how he got his fear of the dark. But now his grandfather will be a Vietnam veteran instead of WWII. Some other ideas may be changed.

The incident that ruins his career takes place during the Great American Solar Eclipse of August 21, 2017. This makes sense as later in the story, a power dark wizard curses the world with eternal darkness, forcing him to overcome his fear if humanity is to be saved.
Sounds great.
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