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Old 07-14-2009, 11:16 PM
Patient Zer0 (Offline)
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I like the ideas you had. Perhaps a re-write in a new direction is in order... =] This was supposed to be about self-harm. The "writing" is the self-harm. The ink screaming where no one hears is the fact that many of the scars are in places we'll never see. I'm not too good at conveying metaphors yet, haha. Thanks so much for the feedback though.
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