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Old 02-25-2017, 05:55 PM
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great punctuation. looks like everyone here is vamping things up! especially these two parts really caught my eye, and a lot of it was unnecessary. for example the bullying technique is done in many different ways. what’s next of you, @annamarth? this is really got some slow movement but if you cut up some extra decisions… all i can say is read more and keep at it!

"The bloody woman, why can she not stay in one place. What drives her to change her appearance every time, making it difficult to keep track of her"

"Great run by the way”

sorry i couldn’t quote; writers beat thinks it unneccessary. lol.

btw, are you a girl? i almost wanna call it hey, big guy!
Do you realize sentences are supposed to be capitalized?
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