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Old 02-27-2017, 02:50 AM
Annamarth (Offline)
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I love the comments and advice. This helps me a lot and gets me out of my head.



Okay, why the question if I am a guy? The first few chapters were in the POV of the Joanne, the last few were written in the POV of Xavier, which POV worked the best?



I am also working on the showing not telling. Another question, must I rewrite this chapter or continue with chapter 23 and focus on the showing and a faster pace. Somebody else also said it was too slow? I will eventually review and polish all the chapters, but should I finish the story first?
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