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Old 10-23-2017, 01:12 PM
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Capitalize the I in last line first stanza
gentle 1st stanza
Accurate in the 2nd stanza.

Other than that, I can't see anything. Poetry isn't my thing. Never liked it, never wrote it well. I drop in form time to time to offer my opinion.
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