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Old 01-13-2017, 07:24 PM
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There was a lot of dialog, but it told the story. I think that's the point in this kind of character driven piece. I much prefer that to tons of description from a narrator.

This is pretty straight forward genre fiction so far. It's good for what it is. I'd personally like to see some freaky genre-bending twists and turns, but a good whoop-ass story with a solid hero is good too sometimes.


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