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Old 12-31-2017, 10:36 AM
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This just Something that popped out, or another novel? Maybe a longish short story? Anyway, it was enjoyable to read. Reminds me a little of a Nabakov(ish) narrative. It’s funny.

I was talking to another writer here about switching a story to first person narrative. Primarily because his native language isn’t English and I thought maybe some of his quirkiness (not the right word really) would sit better in that POV. So, this is a really good example of how someone’s quirkiness (again, not the right word, really) works in a first person narrative.
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