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Old 08-16-2016, 07:57 AM
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Although I am a new writer myself, I enjoyed your piece. It's as if it made you attempt to visualize death and understand its reasoning in a new way. For me at least. I enjoy letting the mind wander, yet I would have enjoyed more details based on why you so badly wanted death to consume you to the point you ached for it every night? And what exactly was so different in you that death would rather starve and watch you then take you? Definitely some good points you can majorly add on to here! Overall I love this piece it makes a person think! Good writing!
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