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Old 11-13-2014, 06:01 AM
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Hey Nacia,

Interesting piece, fun rhyme. Just a few things I have to clarify;


What's the '>?' in the title? Is it supposed to imply that nothing trumps the all powerful conceit?

I am here till white

Does white refer to the closure of one's life and the ascension to heaven?

and you to it recite

What does this mean? Does it imply living one's life?

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