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Old 04-26-2017, 06:31 AM
Myers (Offline)
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OK -- I'm digging these.

On the first one -- the flute and singing sound really good. Is the singing sampled? The beats sound a little off and could use some variation -- they sort of sound like someone beatboxing. The rapping is also a bit lacking in variation on your intonation. Overall, it's a bit long. Maybe employ some less is more on this -- I started to lose interest.

Second one -- love the accordion. Singing sounds great. Same deal with the first one -- too long, in my opinion, without enough variation.

Good job. Cheers.
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