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Old 06-28-2009, 06:43 AM
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I am Tony Tamarkin i am a 25 years old Italian. I work for one of the mafia family's I got a wife and kid who is 2 years old. My life has been tough for the last few years. I like to sit in my study to think about my life. I am a mademan. My best friend got killed when the army. I felt so sad I grief for 5 months. My boss told me have 6 months off work i was finding life hard. But I get through it sooner than later. I hope I talk to you soon. I went to see my boss . I am back at work.


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Old 06-28-2009, 07:56 AM
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Hi Tony, nice to meet you. Which division are you in? Mafioso tend to split up each operation, i.e; drugs, gambling, prostitution. Considering your age you are still a soldier, when did you first start working for the mob? Why?
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Old 06-28-2009, 08:11 AM
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Hi Tony, nice to meet you. Which division are you in? Mafioso tend to split up each operation, i.e; drugs, gambling, prostitution. Considering your age you are still a soldier, when did you first start working for the mob? Why?
Hello Lodon Calling I work in the gambling operation. Yes I am still a soldier. I was 18 years old when I started and the reason is I wanted to be repected. It was nice to meet you see you later.
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Old 06-28-2009, 10:29 AM
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Tony, what the HELL did you do to your hair?
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Old 06-28-2009, 10:44 AM
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I wash my hair thanks and it was nice to meet you.
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Old 06-28-2009, 10:52 AM
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Tony, I'm just curious. You mentioned you're a made man, as far as I am aware, made men usually have higher ranks within the Mafia than Soldier.
Also, tell me more about your familia.
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Old 06-28-2009, 11:17 AM
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Tony, I'm just curious. You mentioned you're a made man, as far as I am aware, made men usually have higher ranks within the Mafia than Soldier.
Also, tell me more about your familia.
My family started in sicily in the 1920s and they are still going strong. We always been in the gambling operation. That is what area I cover.
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Old 06-28-2009, 11:24 AM
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So is your family in charge of operations? Which area does your family run?
Did you finish school before joining the 'family business'? If so, who encouraged that?
Also, you didn't answer my earlier question regarding made men... or are you a made man because of your family?
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Old 06-28-2009, 11:33 AM
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So is your family in charge of operations? Which area does your family run?
Did you finish school before joining the 'family business'? If so, who encouraged that?
Also, you didn't answer my earlier question regarding made men... or are you a made man because of your family?
Dad encourage to finished school. It was because of my mafia family that is why that am a mademan.
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Old 06-28-2009, 11:47 AM
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So how about those clothes, Tony?

And do people ever ask you if you just call yourself Tony to imitate the Sopranos guy?
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So how about those clothes, Tony?

And do people ever ask you if you just call yourself Tony to imitate the Sopranos guy?
NO I don't myself Tony to imtate the Sopranos guy and I wear a white shirt and black jacket and tie. The gray trousers. Anything you want to know about me just ask.
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I have been asking.
So far what I've gotten is you don't know what your character's hair or clothes look like, or are unwilling to share.

Calling this guy Tony is a major mess-up, most would think. But that's up to you.
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Old 06-28-2009, 12:15 PM
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I got black hair and my shirt is white and has long sleves. what else you want to know.
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Old 06-28-2009, 12:47 PM
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Not much, kid. And I'm guessing I'm not alone.

Good luck
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Old 06-29-2009, 12:51 AM
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Hey there Tony. Isn't..being in the mafia bad news? Or difficult? How do you live such a life?
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Old 06-29-2009, 02:59 AM
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Hey there Tony. Isn't..being in the mafia bad news? Or difficult? How do you live such a life?
Hello machine 5 how are you? Some people says that mafia is bad which is true. It is a tough life.
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Dad encourage to finished school. It was because of my mafia family that is why that am a mademan.
Oh, so you got given a title that many kill for because of your family's standing? Don't you feel like a fraud?
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Tony, I'm surprised that your family let you have time off. Most lose so much money when someone who is made leaves for awhile, that they aren't big on "vacations." What specific things are you in charge of? How much do you make for these? Where are you living? (as in what state/city) How many people are in your family? What do the other people do in the gambling arena?
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Old 06-29-2009, 08:07 AM
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So how does a man get made, Tony?
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I think it's time you had that talk with your parents, Lin.

So, Tony, how's the getting-respect thing going for ya?
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Old 06-29-2009, 09:18 AM
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I think it's time you had that talk with your parents, Lin.
LOL!

They were always evasive about that.
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Old 06-30-2009, 07:19 AM
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Tell me about your gambling operation Tony. How do you run things? Do you rule with an iron fist or do you strategically wait for the right moment to step in. High tolerance or low tolerance?
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Old 06-30-2009, 07:25 AM
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Wasting you time. He doesn't even know what a "made man" is. Doesn't know what his character looks like.

I personally think he's just running a goof on this site.
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Old 06-30-2009, 07:40 AM
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I'm open to that possibility Lin, but he could be a novice trying to work things out. Hopefully he is researching the mafia a little better.
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One hopes
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Do you have any idea why your wife married you? You sound like a loser to me. I bet it was for your money. Get counseling.
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Originally Posted by Night Wanderer View Post
Do you have any idea why your wife married you? You sound like a loser to me. I bet it was for your money. Get counseling.
The reason she marriage me because I was caring. I always rule with a Iron fist. If someone cost some of my family money I would kill them, I won't mess around with these matters.
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Old 07-02-2009, 07:55 AM
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So how does a man become "made", Tony?
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Old 07-02-2009, 08:17 AM
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So how does a man become "made", Tony?
The way to get made is the don tell you are made that mean you are reborn as one of the family official member of the family.
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Yeah, but what kind of things do you need to do in order for the "don" to decide that you're good enough to be made?
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