I appreciate the read bumhead; I wrote this directly from an experience with my father and my eight uncles, all of them alcoholics and old country boys, so there is more. I just have to write it.
Hiley, yessir and no? I just try to describe the event and have the people talk like they really would, but I'm very aware of the juxtaposition of the dialogue and the formal narration being there. I just wouldn't call it self-parody for me personally.
Thanks for the read guys.
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