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To "Feel" Deeply

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Old 01-30-2017, 07:35 PM
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To "Feel" Deeply

can I attune my senses to the chemical wash of endorphin?
Close my eyes?
Tune my neural receptors to augment the affection throughput?
Listen for a little while
to the pituitary's perspiration - feeling, flowing.
Knock down the walls
around my heart and let the blood rush.
and drops of dopamine flood and
Fill our minds, nourish the soul

Is it just the endogenous opioid excretion?
Or is this what it means to be

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Old 02-03-2017, 10:14 AM
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Wouldn't it be "Fill my mind"?
Through the smoke and fog there comes a form ... shape shifting ... could this be the Future?
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