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Old 11-17-2016, 02:18 PM
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What a sweet child. please donít change
Love so pure, better canít be arranged

They must be protected from a jaded world.
Donít use reality to make minds be unfurled.

But the saddest fact of down to earth life,
is that even the innocent canít escape strife

So by protecting them from lifeís knowledge.
we get senseless victims attending college.

Theyíre angry all the time - life is such a crime
protest is wonderful, a great way to spend time.

Accomplishing little, certainly not real education
learning little of life, more about procrastination.

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Old 11-17-2016, 02:33 PM
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You really should post these poems on Facebook. I bet you'd get plenty of "likes."
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Old 11-23-2016, 12:45 PM
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I agree..., this is very nice. I've read a few of your posts and you're a very good writer. I like your stuff.
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thanks Mik3 - glad you like -
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