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Life of a Cloud

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Old 11-01-2016, 03:09 PM
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Default Life of a Cloud

1! When I was just a puff of
porcelain smoke.
I trembled to fall as a flash
Of light and strike as a bolt of thunder.

2! When I was just a puff of porcelain cloud
I trembled to droplets of blue rain watering
The whole acre of land.

3! When I was to shift beyond this void of a breathless earth
I moved to droplets of snow.
The touch invitingly to an infant’s tongue
And back again was the cycle of a cloud.

Before I evaporated to water
As every cloud before.

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Old 11-03-2016, 04:10 AM
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The ways of precipitation and a thunderstorm.
Very interesting poem.
Number 3 was definitely my favorite part though.

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Old 12-19-2016, 02:52 PM
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Very nice imagery
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