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Old 12-12-2016, 05:13 AM
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harmony is
palpable
and like a giant
causeway
unsatiable

the more you
feel it
and the more
you mean it

many in their
thousands
seen it
so you
and I
have faith
it wont sedate
but slate
when let down to ferment
berate to a revenge state

harmony is
the make up
of our patrony

shocking when it means
nothing
but everything when it means
something

it is the package deal
life would claim for a meal
delicious and never capricious

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Old 12-17-2016, 02:39 PM
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Needs a different title, but really liked the poem. I would call it "Love Potion" if I were naming it.
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KBR thank you and i think i agree the title may change
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