Just one less comma and one more comma is all I can gather...
"Irresistibly seductive forgiveness for sins uncommitted,
is the hand that not only helps but debilitates, as well"
"Challenges, how ever attainable become mountains of effort,
Far and away out of the mental reach of the overprotected."
" Life's Permanent Temptation is to Confuse Dreams with Reality. Life's Permanent Defeat is to Surrender to Reality." ---Unknown