Originally Posted by pralina
I love this part. It made me stop. It’s sad and funny at the same time and I feel weirdly connected to it. Just two decades later.
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This piece has two places of denouement (you may recall me using that term when commenting on some of your work).
This, where it made you stop, is the first one and, of course there is the ending.
The part that begins with the bridge "That was yesterday" has, in my opinion, the three parts of a story.
Inception
Arc
Nailer