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Old 01-06-2018, 09:29 AM
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dawwp! I loves it


mighty fine job with rhyming there. i congratulate you.

This poem is ready. However, might I suggest adding something more to the title. "Purgatory of _____" or something like that

Yes. Thanks for the great read. I'm gonna find more of your stuff laatter

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Old 01-12-2018, 11:48 AM
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I love the way you wrote this piece...it was very visual for me. Thank you.
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