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Old 05-24-2016, 02:34 PM
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behold the onion


copious tears in each cut


lifetime in layers

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Old 05-24-2016, 10:11 PM
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oh good poem, short and sweet
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Old 06-01-2016, 05:33 AM
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Yonathan1,
Glad you liked. The fun of haiku is to say a lot in 17 syllables
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Ok good job though
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