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I recently revamped my website. I'm looking for feedback. Is it easy to navigate the website? How could the website could be improved? Your responses are appreciated. Thanks! Click on the following link to see my website. www.writtencommunicationcompany.com

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Opening sentence uses same word twice. Suggest consider using goals rather than the second objectives.
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Opening sentence uses same word twice. Suggest consider using goals rather than the second objectives.
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its looking better than it did but its not responsive (doesn't shrink/expand to suit my browser) and that graphic look out of place and should probably go
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its looking better than it did but its not responsive (doesn't shrink/expand to suit my browser) and that graphic look out of place and should probably go
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