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01-07-2018, 03:53 PM
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Big Brick is wide as a whale but thin in spirit
She is dying and getting thin around the edges
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01-07-2018, 04:18 PM
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Welcome back, dear. Nice to see your name.
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01-07-2018, 04:44 PM
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Why thank you. How nice !
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01-07-2018, 04:59 PM
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The world needs a little nice, no?
I’m afraid I’m not much good at the poetry crit. But others will be along soon.
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01-07-2018, 08:14 PM
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I love cookies
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just enough, this poem sticks
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coookies, i know lots about cookies
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