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01-07-2018, 03:53 PM
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Cookie Brick
Big Brick is wide as a whale but thin in spirit
She is dying and getting thin around the edges Like a cookie. 
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01-07-2018, 04:18 PM
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Welcome back, dear. Nice to see your name.
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01-07-2018, 04:44 PM
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Why thank you. How nice !
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01-07-2018, 04:59 PM
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The world needs a little nice, no?
I’m afraid I’m not much good at the poetry crit. But others will be along soon. Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk Pro
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01-07-2018, 08:14 PM
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I love cookies
and adore bricks just enough, this poem sticks and stones. coookies, i know lots about cookies Last edited by Beesauce; 02-28-2018 at 08:18 AM..
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