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Old 01-07-2018, 07:25 AM
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Don't attack my work

It don't post itself

It is helpless

Like a litter of uneye opened
kittens

Plaintive mewing
Needing nipples

How could you find fault with that?


Take on the originator

The person who births this stuff

But before you belittle my pregnancy
relief efforts
consider:

Who got me into this condition?

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Old 01-07-2018, 08:30 PM
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Originally Posted by Nick Pierce View Post
Don't attack my work

It don't post itself

It is helpless

Like a litter of uneye opened
kittens

Plaintive mewing
Needing nipples

How could you find fault with that?


Take on the originator

The person who births this stuff

But before you belittle my pregnancy
relief efforts
consider:

Who got me into this condition?

Who got me in this condition? <<< instead of 'into'


who got me in this position? ,.haha. that2
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