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Here’s no use in crying, pretty dears!
Although we are ill-fated to separate—
It’s such a number as collecting
A treasured keepsake to the heart.

And with our absence, fallen hide—
Long looks, dull daze, quick ways
But with chivalry and disfavor,
Let’s not have any more news!

We shall not let obliquity hinder us
We can take them while they come;
When we’ve left everyone else—
When we think of each other,

It becomes better than we are.
In the eventide, as we are sitting—
Tell the world to do its best,
For better or for worse—

At the fire, by the hearth;—
Then shall soul with won soul meet
Grant invasive tongue for tie.
In the evening time, we ne’er lie!

So cold the chains on us have formed,
A band so strong, nor dare direct us—
The bridle to another guided alliance—
We can meet out of concept, afterthought;

Down the line, in the course of time
The stars shine merry on us always—
Close at hand, forbidding ills are meant
To be great tidings in the eternal place.

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you really should record you reading this
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you really should record you reading this


She won't do that. She's too shy.
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See... told ya
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Yeah, the only limitations we have are those we place upon ourselves or allow others to place upon us.
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Spoken like a true general
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guys, have any thoughts on restricting your pace? everyone has their own tricks about flow. please share. if you want. hope i'm being clear!
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guys, have any thoughts on restricting your pace? everyone has their own tricks about flow. please share. if you want. hope i'm being clear!

Well, I bet Nick Pierce can gift you advice about all the flow stuff. His pieces all have that smooth move feel if you know what I mean
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nick? what happened to your flow pieces??
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