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Old 03-14-2018, 08:35 PM
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each shadow gets a little bit colder
each step I make gets a little bit bolder,
but then the world sets in a bit
a bit of magic dying in the wilderness...

chorus:
when fire starts falling down
when the water comes rising
as long as you池e near
i値l be sure to keep you here.
i値l be sure to keep you here.

but when is it right to hold hands,
when the whole house is crumbling under me?
your name is the game on my tongue
i知 learning to place the dream from the burn

hook:
just be brave, brace the fears
just behave, they値l start to cheer

chorus

i値l be sure to keep you, my dear. x4

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Old 03-15-2018, 11:02 AM
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Pretty solid. Good mix of simple more pop-like lyrics and interesting imagery.

You gotta knack for this, young lady.
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