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Old 11-30-2013, 06:06 PM
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Hello. I've never really been one for posting on forums, so excuse me if I come across as a bit stiff. I've been writing for a few years now, about three I think. My writing tends to get a bit wordy, according to the people I've shown it to. I hope that isnt too much of a problem here. Stories just kind of get away from me and before I know it, I've written about three pages and the plot hasnt even gotten rolling yet. One of my main problems is that I dont think my characters are really all that good, and I find dialogue to be hard. I guess I'll just let you guys decide what you think for yourselves.

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Old 12-01-2013, 12:36 AM
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Glad to have you here, Kosmo.

We all have out little gripes with the craft, so don't worry there.

Please check out the FAQ. It will give you all you need to know posting and participating.

Hopefully I'll see you around.
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Hi! Dialogue is tuff to master on any given story I'd say, but don't let it discourage you, Kosmo. Try using it as a tool to drive your plot along instead of wordy description where applicable. Make your characters take center stage, they will appreciate it!

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Old 12-01-2013, 06:46 AM
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lol Bagit

Hi Kosmo, nice to meet you. I have sort of the same problem you have, except I have all the characters in my head and no idea how to start about half the stories I think of for them.
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Old 12-01-2013, 10:29 AM
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Hi Kosmo! Good to have you around!

Character development is something that comes with getting to know your characters in detail. That can be a difficult thing to do by yourself, but maybe the Character Clinics here can help you with that. You create a thread from the point of view of your character, and members ask the character questions, which you answer from their point of view. This might help you give them a little more depth. I know it helped me tremendously in developing my novel. It might be worth taking a look at

Also, something that might help in developing your own writing skills, is to critique the work of others. By reading pieces by other members and critiquing their dialogue -- what was good, what was less good and how can that be solved? -- you learn how to look more critically at your own work and make it better in the process. Plus, you get to know members around the boards!

Have fun, and I hope to see you around! Grab a cup of crunchy tea and a lollipop
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I hope you find the feedback you need. Welcome!
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