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Old 07-27-2018, 06:01 PM
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I wonder sometimes,
Making words and rhymes,
If some plant their seeds,
What feeds their needs,

I imagine there is cash,
No gash or bash or female trashed,
Equality, like a solitary male,
And a position for sale,
To the prettiest incumbent,
even if the system is repugnant,
And the unattractive fail.

As an unattractive man,
I have pushed my face to the fan,
I have instigated a ban,
I have tried fake tan,
I have called myself Stan,
I have ran and ran,
Until I found what was wrong,

It hurts but I will be strong,
I will wear my girlfriend's thong,
I will sing my song,
If faces could light up, my face shone,
To elucidate , and vacate this place,
and remove my smug face,
what is emphatically wrong,
Is that people grant power on negative privilege
And this village is full of incompetents.


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Old 07-28-2018, 08:25 AM
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very nice I like.
I like the rhymes.

As an unattractive man,
I have pushed my face to the fan,
I have instigated a ban,
I have tried fake tan,
I have called myself Stan,
I have ran and ran,
Until I found what was wrong,
This is one of my favourite stanza.

and these lines are particularly interesting and made me smile in a good way

I will wear my girlfriend's thong,
I will sing my song,
If faces could light up, my face shone,
To elucidate , and vacate this place,
and remove my smug face,

nice one!
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thx, is kinda just crap tho.
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