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Old 07-28-2018, 04:15 PM
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life is a gimmick
face the crowd
and be proud
or leave the scene
and be a cloud
life is beyond
a doubt
it won't take prisoners
unless it is allowed.

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a lesson in
life is a pound
in sound
it reminds us
it is expensive a fine
so bear one
in mind

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I like this Nacia. Gets the point across succinctly.
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I like this Nacia. Gets the point across succinctly.
Leila thank you very much for reading and feedback .
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A concise poem indeed.
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