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Old 07-29-2018, 08:06 AM
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the stone of self doubt sunk me
and I was pushed into the earth

when it reached my crotch
the pain was too much

so I threw it off
and although I can't get out

I am feeling better

and am hoping that a woman
who is not afraid to get dirty

can sit upon the earth before me
and quake it

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Old 07-29-2018, 01:21 PM
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haha it is what it is and glad to hear the pain is gone !¬¬
wonderfully presented lots of depth and quirkiness at the same time well done!!!
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Old 07-30-2018, 09:51 PM
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anna had carefully gathered up his words and placed them on fleas thread, she hoped that wasn’t a bad thing to do (they can be removed if you want so) Just the sentiment is achingly bewitching and I loved it so. Thanks for the sharing.
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really well worded. nice job!
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